Friday, December 14, 2012

Cover for my serial

New cover for you to comment on - please. :)



7 comments:

  1. The background is very washed out and is doing be hard to see in a thumbnail.
    The text will be difficult to rest as well.
    Not sure what to suggest.

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  2. Actually the text is easy to read in thumbnail. I was more worried about the multiple fonds.... :) Thanks, Karl.

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  3. Except maybe the last line... A bit concerned about that one...

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  4. All the cover needs is an image that says, "come closer and get to know me better." The reader can always click on the thumbnail to get the full cover. By that time, they're already reading the blurb. ;-)

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  5. The 'the' with the gradient seems to half disappear into the picture, but as that's not a very important word and I don't know as that's a big concern. It might be just a hair less busy if it were the same font as 'encounter'. Overall though, I really like it. :)

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